tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post3527606013494266261..comments2023-12-05T23:02:28.580-05:00Comments on Excursions and Diversions: Unfinished LinesSteve Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-82212403298742558642012-11-28T07:46:04.741-05:002012-11-28T07:46:04.741-05:00"so many acts left undone,
and so much nearly..."so many acts left undone,<br />and so much nearly complete,"<br /><br />The older I get it seems, the more I tend to focus on that which is undone, rather than all that is "nearly complete." This piece encompasses a wonderful pondering and reflection on both. A pleasure to read as always, Steve.Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-39729001835144150032012-11-27T23:42:11.533-05:002012-11-27T23:42:11.533-05:00..this will stick with me as I am all too aware of.....this will stick with me as I am all too aware of the 'punctuation without care' or lack of diligence that I consider, as well as an extra space or two between words..nicely done ;)Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-57284084079376805532012-11-27T19:24:55.803-05:002012-11-27T19:24:55.803-05:00Life renews but you nail the empty consolation in ...Life renews but you nail the empty consolation in the fact: it isn't us,renewed, reborn, second-chanced but something else, unmemoried, isolate, and very much random. Your words are woven especially tightly through your ideas here Steve--I like that, makes always for a stronger fabric, where the pattern is clear, though sometimes its fun to wander and batik, too. In this case I think the close symbiosis works well.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-33349927881302883202012-11-27T17:37:13.109-05:002012-11-27T17:37:13.109-05:00Nice take on punctuation ... so much is left unsai...Nice take on punctuation ... so much is left unsaid and undone ...marousiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12925164210601407878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-27880993146169171462012-11-27T17:27:54.318-05:002012-11-27T17:27:54.318-05:00I can really feel that ache of what could have bee...I can really feel that ache of what could have been and all that has been left undone. That last stanza was my favorite :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01547380098561803645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-17671103961333102462012-11-27T16:08:59.005-05:002012-11-27T16:08:59.005-05:00Life is a poem, death is an elegy - understanding ...Life is a poem, death is an elegy - understanding always lies in the punctuation. A careful exploration of being and possibilities that left one with an awareness and the need for self examination.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-16778111008432661212012-11-27T15:31:38.471-05:002012-11-27T15:31:38.471-05:00 so many acts left undone,
and so much nearly comp... so many acts left undone,<br />and so much nearly complete...I think this sums it up for all of us . There is so much left to do and so many things that are halfway done. Like Brian I think it would be hard to leave things unsaid...ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-26215470045481080722012-11-27T15:13:18.462-05:002012-11-27T15:13:18.462-05:00a sketch wrought all too quick,...life is but a ta...a sketch wrought all too quick,...life is but a taper you know...smiles.we never know when death will come...and i wonder at times at the things i have left undone.....i think it is the things i leave unsaid that really scare me the most...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com