tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post8178326678148321845..comments2023-12-05T23:02:28.580-05:00Comments on Excursions and Diversions: Out of AmnesiaSteve Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-89550789440236253582014-09-12T20:17:52.919-04:002014-09-12T20:17:52.919-04:00I'm more than happy to uncover this website. I...I'm more than happy to uncover this website. I wanted to thank you for your time for this <br />particularly fantastic read!! I definitely appreciated every little <br />bit of it and I have you saved to fav to see new stuff on your blog.<br /><br /><br /><br />my webpage ... wordpress (<a href="https://app.box.com/s/gnj2la0e0l0b7ovzw4mo" rel="nofollow"></a>)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-46502024268716849152014-07-22T10:48:49.588-04:002014-07-22T10:48:49.588-04:00You really make it appear so easy together with yo...You really make it appear so easy together with your presentation but I to <br />find this matter to be really one thing which I believe I <br />might never understand. It sort of feels too complex and extremely wide for me.<br />I am having a look ahead in your next post, I will attempt <br />to get the grasp of it!<br /><br />Review my web page <a href="http://wiki.planetarygovernment.com/index.php?title=Make_Better_Choices_Because_Of_This_HVAC_Advice" rel="nofollow">http://wiki.planetarygovernment.com</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-15111591247809366322012-10-30T23:14:52.067-04:002012-10-30T23:14:52.067-04:00reaching through the thin air
of an empty height
t...reaching through the thin air<br />of an empty height<br />to stir a stew of myth... and...the stepchild of a dream...were my fav lines in this...among many brilliant lines...but one have to choose..or not..? smilesClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-28765798258145039132012-10-23T23:52:11.475-04:002012-10-23T23:52:11.475-04:00Many wonderful turns of phrase here - and an inter...Many wonderful turns of phrase here - and an interesting notion - to come out of amnesia - I especially liked this:<br /><br />What once was void<br />at last a place<br />to cultivate the fruit<br />of one’s un-axiomed conjectures.<br /><br />(I just love un-axiomed conjuectures.) - And then the whole close is marvelous. k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-65181845855708878392012-10-23T22:12:22.894-04:002012-10-23T22:12:22.894-04:00Amazing piece, Steve.Amazing piece, Steve.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-14633530439792874732012-10-23T21:02:22.403-04:002012-10-23T21:02:22.403-04:00A great write, Steve. Brilliant lines !A great write, Steve. Brilliant lines !ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-90261091046584842572012-10-23T20:33:40.362-04:002012-10-23T20:33:40.362-04:00Interesting take on the lifting of amnesia, a mome...Interesting take on the lifting of amnesia, a moment ready for the cue light to show ~ I also like step child of a dream, lovely weaving here Steve ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-65971683030148056372012-10-23T19:56:54.729-04:002012-10-23T19:56:54.729-04:00steve, wow, this is great. i have to stand up and...steve, wow, this is great. i have to stand up and applaud. so smooth and so straight... with all of its curves. your work here isn't climbing, it's leaping... i love that, very very well done. phillip woodruff (jalopy dreams)https://www.blogger.com/profile/08224547506080365774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-14347432450710107002012-10-23T19:51:56.566-04:002012-10-23T19:51:56.566-04:00this made me smile, for me it was about the proces...this made me smile, for me it was about the process of writing, poetry works so much this way for me...<br />love these lines:<br />"reaching through the thin air<br />of an empty height<br />to stir a stew of myth<br />from teeming shadows far below;"<br />and so much more... great write!mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-31940048915523899082012-10-23T17:42:46.915-04:002012-10-23T17:42:46.915-04:00smiles..it is a journey and oft we dont know where...smiles..it is a journey and oft we dont know where we are going and its easy as well to lose the hope of that one day...that we might reach even a step child of a dream, much less the real thing...and we try not to forget...and carry on...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-56943653644753415002012-10-23T16:37:39.300-04:002012-10-23T16:37:39.300-04:00I could never say it as eloquently as Hedge...but ...I could never say it as eloquently as Hedge...but the comment above resonates so well with me...as fantastic as that fog of amnesia...a brilliant write, Steve...as they always are!Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-19759775109067456402012-10-23T16:15:55.375-04:002012-10-23T16:15:55.375-04:00I must admit I was more economical in my initial t...I must admit I was more economical in my initial thinking--more along the lines of a metaphor for the writing process. Thanks for the expansive and illuminating commentary.Steve Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-85590092752842582302012-10-23T16:11:15.790-04:002012-10-23T16:11:15.790-04:00'work through it TO'--my fingers lagging b...'work through it TO'--my fingers lagging behind my brain, as usual.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-9520296419752788542012-10-23T16:10:19.310-04:002012-10-23T16:10:19.310-04:00"..finally, the outline of a thing
that must ... "..finally, the outline of a thing<br />that must at least be called<br />the stepchild of a dream."<br /><br />Only one of so many individual shining facets of this bit of word art. Your use of amnesia for the fog of living(or so I read) is masterful, and the effort it takes to work through it what we once feel we knew but can't grasp...fine work here, Steve. A pleasure as always to read.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-36780841392891200762012-10-23T15:42:42.649-04:002012-10-23T15:42:42.649-04:00Absolutely loved this Steve, the image you've ...Absolutely loved this Steve, the image you've used is arcane- the fall of the fool, depicting the arcana of the tarot deck. Show's you how full of useless knowledge my brain is. Anyhoo, the dream so obscure it may be reality and life itself is the epitome of the wake up slap at birth. Great conceptsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-22137813635988712332012-10-23T15:28:26.665-04:002012-10-23T15:28:26.665-04:00There is so much I love about this: "[Unseen ...There is so much I love about this: "[Unseen winds purge heavy clouds to bare the sky" and working through and lifting amnesia! The whole concept of going from obscurity to clarity, from the dark womb to birth, wonderful!Jenny Hernerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15884658886582080587noreply@blogger.com