tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post3728871249115578227..comments2023-12-05T23:02:28.580-05:00Comments on Excursions and Diversions: Sonnet Five: I watch and waitSteve Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-72642457744761988492017-08-14T00:18:24.432-04:002017-08-14T00:18:24.432-04:00We're all waiting for the sun with you and tho...We're all waiting for the sun with you and those small blessings that abide. Colleen@ Looseleafhttp://looseleafnotes.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-64854197695123468232017-08-13T22:52:16.144-04:002017-08-13T22:52:16.144-04:00Congratulations — I admire writers of sonnets.Congratulations — I admire writers of sonnets.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-9753608457356475612017-08-13T21:02:52.832-04:002017-08-13T21:02:52.832-04:00I love rhyming - done well - and you have nailed i...I love rhyming - done well - and you have nailed it here. A joy to read!Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-91299389280970702782017-08-13T20:56:44.000-04:002017-08-13T20:56:44.000-04:00A wonderful lament A wonderful lament Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-66240284065823092422017-08-13T18:53:18.238-04:002017-08-13T18:53:18.238-04:00I did enjoy this sonnet, especially the undertow o...I did enjoy this sonnet, especially the undertow of hope. And the blessings of the little things.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-34258426303118459352017-08-13T18:05:46.520-04:002017-08-13T18:05:46.520-04:00Beautifully penned. I love it!Beautifully penned. I love it!ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-206519071545219352017-08-13T17:29:40.890-04:002017-08-13T17:29:40.890-04:00Love your taking on the sonnet form, Steve. You h...Love your taking on the sonnet form, Steve. You handle it well.Sarah Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06548593069470592148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-77491057995197215712017-08-13T17:14:52.231-04:002017-08-13T17:14:52.231-04:00Interesting.
ZQInteresting.<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-39560178063006091132017-08-13T13:38:47.561-04:002017-08-13T13:38:47.561-04:00What a BEAUTIFUL and moving sonnet. I especially l...What a BEAUTIFUL and moving sonnet. I especially love that undertow of hope - and your moving closing lines. Wow. Nice to see you in the Pantry, Steve.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01926508656571639801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-17974933927149026152017-08-13T13:26:28.663-04:002017-08-13T13:26:28.663-04:00I watch and wait too holding onto your amazing wor...I watch and wait too holding onto your amazing words...<br /><br />'I’ll hold to what I pray shall be restored.<br />An undertow of hope thus sets my course'Donna@LivingFromHappinesshttp://www.livingfromhappiness.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-68552813457710337442017-08-13T12:50:26.196-04:002017-08-13T12:50:26.196-04:00Ah, the joy of the little things... ~ blessings to...Ah, the joy of the little things... ~ blessings to you!humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-42378355510350117682017-08-13T12:30:21.704-04:002017-08-13T12:30:21.704-04:00I like the way you have crafted your poem with ter...I like the way you have crafted your poem with tercets to end with a fine couplet. An enjoyable read, I must say.Julianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-75691164157231220972017-08-13T11:23:09.918-04:002017-08-13T11:23:09.918-04:00A most unforgettable write!❤️A most unforgettable write!❤️Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-17981702545289510272017-08-13T09:23:09.230-04:002017-08-13T09:23:09.230-04:00We do have to continue to gather those small bless...We do have to continue to gather those small blessings...and keep the undertow of hope alive!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-28285062777847165382017-08-13T09:09:23.928-04:002017-08-13T09:09:23.928-04:00Love the flow on this one. Well writtenLove the flow on this one. Well writtenSuyashJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06332045821743367072noreply@blogger.com