tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post6198480652643166548..comments2023-12-05T23:02:28.580-05:00Comments on Excursions and Diversions: Seeing StarsSteve Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-12559748539698102642014-04-15T17:54:33.527-04:002014-04-15T17:54:33.527-04:00Useful info. Fortunate me I discovered your websit...Useful info. Fortunate me I discovered your website unintentionally, and <br />I'm shocked why this coincidence did not took place in advance!<br />I bookmarked it.<br /><br />Feel free to surf to my web blog ... <a href="http://www.brzesko.co.pl/?mapa" rel="nofollow">www</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-31908184706904761302012-11-08T07:27:34.905-05:002012-11-08T07:27:34.905-05:00wow... this will haunt me. There are so many raw e...wow... this will haunt me. There are so many raw emotions and thoughts contained within. Well done.Beth Winterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00123202473118521429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-38261647781101560802012-11-08T07:15:28.866-05:002012-11-08T07:15:28.866-05:00she sang through darkness
heard the song, not the ...she sang through darkness<br />heard the song, not the singing<br />knew she must be dreaming<br />or else be a dream,<br /><br />These four lines could almost have been a refrain. They made a big impact on me, and maybe coloured to some extent the rest of the poem. A really great write which seems to have come so effortless from the image -- though I realise that it may not have! I was hooked.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-89418910757475669102012-11-07T16:43:53.712-05:002012-11-07T16:43:53.712-05:00Beautiful haunting poemBeautiful haunting poemmarousiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12925164210601407878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-46111902477163802022012-11-07T13:31:52.543-05:002012-11-07T13:31:52.543-05:00"..time smoothing sharp breaks
to a plainer a..."..time smoothing sharp breaks<br />to a plainer anguish.<br />Empty window and the dampened stars.."<br />So many musings in this, turns through the catacombs of mind, of living. The examination of loss and of love unsparing, of self as well. Beautifully written, and I agree with Karin that the title is excellent.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-67696723765548433262012-11-07T00:01:06.064-05:002012-11-07T00:01:06.064-05:00the singing through darkness is what touched me mo...the singing through darkness is what touched me most here as this is something i can strongly relate to...a beautiful write steveClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-29565007411060115462012-11-06T22:37:52.117-05:002012-11-06T22:37:52.117-05:00First - what a great title for this poem! Seeing ...First - what a great title for this poem! Seeing Stars in so many ways - the stars you describe and just plain dizziness and starstruckness - love = and even though I'm on the catarrh side and am beginning to get cataracts, I so identified with this poem - There is something that seems to describe old love even though it eschews it! Maybe because it describes love and loss of innocence so beautifully and we are always innocent in love even if only to the faults of the lover! Wonderful. k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-76682772254356949762012-11-06T22:08:28.681-05:002012-11-06T22:08:28.681-05:00"The heart might cease, yet still not fail to..."The heart might cease, yet still not fail to beat."<br /><br />I feel such profound emptiness when I read this. How sad to feel so alone even when still together, to have someone so totally unaware of whom the other truly is. You have an amazing way of capturing such depth of emotion, of finding your way into the core of all that you write about. Well penned, Steve.Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-72260805222938177492012-11-06T20:38:06.373-05:002012-11-06T20:38:06.373-05:00"Is this how dreams are lost?"
Wow, I t..."Is this how dreams are lost?" <br />Wow, I think I need to join this site. Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-43081146989958760982012-11-06T19:49:49.976-05:002012-11-06T19:49:49.976-05:00Beautiful, the singing diction and undercurrents c...Beautiful, the singing diction and undercurrents conspire to create potent poetry.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17392858163745232319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-30920742062337091542012-11-06T18:25:02.185-05:002012-11-06T18:25:02.185-05:00This is a very poignant write, Steve! Stunningly c...This is a very poignant write, Steve! Stunningly composed.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-73265962831648029222012-11-06T17:41:26.906-05:002012-11-06T17:41:26.906-05:00Empty window and dampened stars... I wanted more o...Empty window and dampened stars... I wanted more of those!!! Great phrasing. This melodrama could be acted out upon a stage and none would doubt its authenticity!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-73402833424470032852012-11-06T16:00:59.019-05:002012-11-06T16:00:59.019-05:00Beautiful lines....closing her eyes...a gorgeous w...Beautiful lines....closing her eyes...a gorgeous write.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-75240880061892881762012-11-06T15:58:28.211-05:002012-11-06T15:58:28.211-05:00nice...love how you ease us into this with her clo...nice...love how you ease us into this with her closing her eyes...not like death only love...what a beautiful thought and that last stanza is strong as well...love it steve...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-10008196985205849052012-11-06T15:38:23.998-05:002012-11-06T15:38:23.998-05:00Oh my, this is beautiful and powerful and clanged ...Oh my, this is beautiful and powerful and clanged together at the end in a breath that made me say "wow." This is a poem that will stick with me.mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-22229802499278882852012-11-06T15:27:30.469-05:002012-11-06T15:27:30.469-05:00Makes me think it might be hard to separate dream ...Makes me think it might be hard to separate dream from death. Reminded me of this: http://www.looseleafnotes.com/wp/2008/10/543/colleenhttp://looseleafnotes.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8912094816780327975.post-54412079356743137462012-11-06T15:10:48.796-05:002012-11-06T15:10:48.796-05:00First one more
Here at your shore
Such a journey t...First one more<br />Here at your shore<br />Such a journey that takes place<br />As each embracePat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.com