© Steve King
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This room cannot speak to me of emptiness,
for nothing in its corners and high shadow
yields a thought of anything—
save corners, shadows.
Were I to think of emptiness,
I would picture other,
knowing in my heart
an absent habitation
that did once belong.
But nothing of a room,
where emptiness is just a word,
a proxy to formalize the nature of a place
and the inviolability of moment;
a simple means to keep
the perfect balance of a waiting space, quiet—
faint intimation of contingent purposes
foreshadowing the outline
of some unthought future,
all so free and new.
Were I to think of emptiness
I would not need this room.
I would summon aged moods,
emotion without substance,
(indeed, were I to think on it at all)
ineradicable remembrance,
unrevoked regret;
the chiming of old laughters,
and once-bright mornings come
to upend each passing misery.
Were I to think on emptiness
I would know a heart alone,
hollow moments filled
with unanswered questions,
of how the times might be
if not for absence,
that sure emptiness now—
so filled with all perfected memories
that only ancient absence may allow.
A new poem for the Poetry Pantry
Steve great intensity of expression in this poem. The emptiness is palpable - wow
ReplyDeleteI love how you picture the emptiness as a room with the shadowed corners and move on to the emptiness having no need for the room.. we can carry emptiness with us even into the crowded street...
ReplyDeleteThis is very beautiful and evocative........the closing lines are especially wonderful. I too like the switch from the empty room to a greater emptiness.
ReplyDeleteSo beautifully written, Steve, and thought-provoking.
ReplyDeleteI admire how you wrote of emptiness without the obvious definition of empty room but the other, the quiet waiting space ~ I specially love the last stanza, the contrast of heart alone versus the perfected memories ~ Such deep reflections here Steve ~
ReplyDeleteHappy week ahead ~ Grace
very interesting piece,,,
ReplyDeleteGlad I stopped by.
ZQ
emptiness is a room, without windows or doors...and sometimes i can not even find the corners...and sometimes it is like waiting on a bus that never seems to get there....smiles...cool write steve...i like how you approached this...
ReplyDelete"hollow moments filled / with unanswered questions,"...true emptiness..i
ReplyDeletelike the progression in this piece..much thought provoking...
Your poem really gets to the heart of emptiness....emotion without substance, a heart alone, unrevoked regret... Very vivid poem, one to be felt at the deepest level.
ReplyDeleteEmptiness is just a word. How well you have extrapolated the idea of its not saying enough to truly reflect what is felt.
ReplyDeleteemptiness is something so concrete and yet so abstract that i find it hard to capture - you did really really well with it steve
ReplyDeleteYes, I too admire how you wrote of emptiness without dipping into the communal bucket of usual.
ReplyDeletelike much the flow and rhythm of this fine piece, and the notion of "waiting space" lovely write, Steve! ~jackie~
ReplyDeleteHi Steve, It is so interesting to see how your mind moves here--shaping the room and then moving through it and back into the mind and heart. What is especailly interesting to me is how solid each of the places feels-in part because you describe the room with such palpable and actual detail, so ti is like we are moving from space to space. There is great poignancy in an emptiness of absence rather than expectation, and there is a feeling that the pain of the absence can be moved to one of these physical other places by surrounding it, describing its container, rather than it itself.. This is , I think, how people handle pain, and it is beautifully limned here. K.
ReplyDeleteI love how you explore the hollowness and loss of feelings conceptualized as this empty room; this place where if one tried, they might still see glimpses of what once was, hear those voices from long past. You guide us through this place of loneliness that is not truly empty but filled with longing and certain sadness, ghosts of feelings past. Your words have a way of making us "insiders" so that we don't just read them, we feel them. The fourth stanza and last stanzas do it for me. Wonderfully penned, my friend.
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