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Sunday, September 27, 2015

Morning


©  Steve King
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The clockface called it morning,
but without sense of newness,
nor of a moment pregnant
with light upon the world:
time enough to count the hours backward.

My sigh rolled across
a clutch of gathered blankets,
ill wind coursing on a naked peak.

My shadow fell across the emptiness—
stormclouds close upon a fallow field.



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14 comments:

  1. Sometimes mornings are not so much a fresh start but a reminder of what we need to still deal with from the night and day before - a very resonant poem

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  2. It's disheartening when clockface calls it morning and not the sun....

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  3. I know the feeling, soon the mornings will be dark like night.. the clock is a liar, a beast,and the blankets will not bring warmth to my shivering soul.

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  4. Well, goodness. You had me right here:
    "The clockface called it morning"
    This is just a fantastic phrase. And then that "clutch of gathered blankets."
    Wonderful.

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  5. Time is now...forget the hands on the clock and the earth spins counterclockwise...tick tock..tick tock...

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  6. I so like "ill wind coursing on a naked peak". I so know the feeling of not wanting to get up, but my dog insists.

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  7. The third stanza - oh how many times I have lain shivering in so called comfort...wonderful lines. Spencer is kanzensakura

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  8. Oh such apt words for those mornings we just want to pull the covers over our heads....

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  9. I've felt this way--exactly--before treatment for depression. Your words: backward, sigh, ill, naked, emptiness and fallow ring so true. That "clutch of gathered blanket" can be a life raft at times.

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  10. There is the heaviness of certain days here but also, I thought, so much wordplay on the body-- as it seemed to me to be the geography described-- that I couldn't help smiling. Maybe that was not intentional but I feel like the body is so much our landscape and I found that aspect just so clever and right that I hope it was (intentional). Hope all well, Steve. K.

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  11. This is so well crafted. It's almost as if you were looking out my window today, although there seems to be more barrenness than just the landscape here.

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  12. "The clockface called it morning"...but not the sun, not my body wanting to stay under the warm blankets....

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  13. Perhaps because I myself like to include metaphor, some double-meaning in my own words, I always read the works of others wondering of the thoughts behind the writing. And perhaps because I am feeling my age more of late, when I read your words I can almost see reflection on the same. Or perhaps on this gray morning, I am just projecting! Love this piece Steve. Brief, concise, and perfectly worded.

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