© Steve King
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That night you chanced upon the old
café,
I recalled times we had so
long ago.
Not just the words, nor how we
sounded then,
but in the
way our eyes would speak for us
to top the clamor, and the way our smiles
at once would
satisfy each hidden care.
The while
you spoke, I pored over your face.
I saw the
things the years worked to deny:
youth,
innocence and infatuation,
wrapped
in the folds of some fine elegance;
a legacy
that showed your gaze, your smile,
framed just
the way an artist might have done
to hold
it for my ideal vision.
I needed
but a curve, a shadowed line,
one
turn, one scent, to seize the whole again.
When you had gone, your space was resonant,
grace
notes alive to theme old worlds anew.
I took your
picture, needlessly, I know,
for I
will never look to you that way:
that
image would not so deny the years—
cast by
the bottled light on plastic screen,
recording
but a shape, without your forms;
hard
vestiges that point to your old griefs,
the changes
you accrued in long absence,
the weight
of secrets never meant for me,
and gladnesses that I shall never see.
These speak
not to the pleasures in my eyes,
that
choose to find only what could not be;
nor to the
hold of ancient promisings,
and old
sirens that sang too long to me.
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Such a heart-touching read. Beautifully penned. :-)
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Funny how we cling to memories of the past which may be different from reality ~ The poignancy and sadness are palpable in your words but I specially like how you pored over the face in the second stanza, that curve and line to seized the whole again ~
ReplyDeleteAs always a pleasure to read you Steve ~
No need to visit me this time, I'm taking a short break ~
Happy week ~
Grace
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ReplyDeleteI like how you use theme as a verb.and these lingering romantic thoughts.
ReplyDelete'I pored over your face.' ~ the observation by the artist, love the line. ~ evocative poem...
ReplyDeleteExcellent writing! I am glad to be here!
ReplyDeletebridging the past with the
future
the past sometimes distorts the present when viewed through a prism...something we all do at times... good write.. it promotes thought...
ReplyDeleteThe memory/reality/photograph: you have captured the limitations of all three while by having your narrator sit in the afterglow, the still encumbered space of an old siren song. I feel I have had similar brief reunions (or wished them).
ReplyDeleteYes the remembered past seems so often to color the present perceptions. Some lovely lines in this.
ReplyDeletemy goodness i believe i have lived this moment. how well-wrought, i love this.
ReplyDeleteHow we try to lay hold of those perfect moments in time, with a photo, or even a poem, while never quite clinging to the ephemeral experiences of our lives.
ReplyDeleteThat very much struck a chord. Thank you.
ReplyDeletea picture will never completely capture the moment...i like the poring over their face...the intensity of that, trying to capture the moment even if in memory.....def a strong emotion behind these words as well...
ReplyDeleteSo lovely and poignant.... Photos have always felt a bit like false memories to me. Love what you did here.
ReplyDeleteThis is marvelous....truly loved it ;)
ReplyDeleteNice. It is more than the shape of light and shadow that goes into knowing what someone looks like, inside and out.
ReplyDeleteExquisite poem, as beautiful as the picture you painted with your words. :)
ReplyDeleteA wonderful poem, I love it. So true with memories and how the years progress and life changes and so do the people we love or have loved.
ReplyDeleteThere is often one we remember more than any others, and having lived a full life and knowing we can never go back to that place, still sometimes we ponder the "what-ifs" and "maybes," A truly lovely and poignant story reflecting on and capturing that bond (that pull) between past and present. A beautiful piece of writing as always, Steve!
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ReplyDeleteOne more time, without the typos:
ReplyDeleteA bittersweet sense of loss that yet holds on pervades this, Steve. Things that live in the mind and heart are so often more than what our eyes can see, under 'bottled light,' in the artificial world that confines us in time and space to be only what we are and not everything we were or could/should have been. Evocative, balanced and beautiful sense of nostalgia in this, and also a feel for what is actually valued and real.
Steve a poignant piece of looking into both the past and future through the present. >KB
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